2017年考研英語作文美句表達(dá)煉成大法
2016-05-16 11:05 | 太奇MBA網(wǎng)
管理類碩士官方備考群，考生互動，擇校評估，真題討論 點(diǎn)擊加入備考群>>一篇好的英語作文必然是由N多不錯的美句表達(dá)構(gòu)成的，我們在談及提升英語作文水平的時候也提到，一定要多背送一些美句，那么，何為好的美句，你再背誦及寫作的時候把我的度是什么?下面總結(jié)了美句構(gòu)成的5個特點(diǎn)，按照這個標(biāo)準(zhǔn)走相信遣詞造句能力一定會提升。
特點(diǎn)一：整體性
句子的整體性：即能表達(dá)單獨(dú)的、完整的思想。
Eg. Born in a small town in South China in the early 50s, he grew up to be a famous musician.
【分析】這個句子表達(dá)了兩層思想：1. Born in a small town出生在一個小鎮(zhèn) 2. grew up to be a musician.長大成為了音樂家。這個句子應(yīng)該分成兩句來寫。除此之外，還需要增加一些信息來連接兩層思想。
【提升】He was born in a small town in South China in the early 50s. In his childhood he liked to sing. Later he entered a music conservatory. In the 70s, he grew up to be an accomplished musician.
特點(diǎn)二：連貫性
句子的連貫性：即能清晰地連接句子的各個部分，沒有虛假的平行結(jié)構(gòu)，沒有指代不請的代詞，沒有不清晰的句內(nèi)關(guān)系。
Eg. Upon entering the classroom, the students stood up and said, “good morning!”
【分析】這個句子從語法來講是正確的，但是句內(nèi)關(guān)系不清楚，到底誰進(jìn)入了教室?
【提升】When the teacher entered the classroom, the students stood up and said, “good morning!”
Eg. Elizabeth and I enjoy walking, to ski, travel and teaching university students.
【分析】這個句子的連貫性較差，可以利用平行結(jié)構(gòu)來體現(xiàn)連貫性。
【提升】Elizabeth and I enjoy walking, skiing, traveling and teaching university students.
特點(diǎn)三：準(zhǔn)確性
句子的準(zhǔn)確性指句子內(nèi)部沒有不準(zhǔn)確的，不必要的詞。
Eg. He returned in the early part of the month of August.
【分析】這個句子感覺有故意寫長之嫌，需要精簡。
【提升】He returned in early August.
特點(diǎn)四：重點(diǎn)突出
好的句子應(yīng)該重點(diǎn)突出，詞的選擇，詞的重復(fù)都有助于句子的重點(diǎn)突出。
Eg. When the bank robbers entered the bank they yelled, “don’t move!”
【分析】這個句子比較平淡，可以修改一下動詞。
【提升】When the bank robbers rushed into the bank they yelled, “don’t move!”
特點(diǎn)五：語法正確，句式多變
句式多變指句子長短結(jié)合。如果全篇都是復(fù)雜的長難句，文章讀起來會晦澀難懂，并且有挑釁閱卷人之嫌。反之，全篇都是短句，感覺有侮辱閱卷人之感。
Eg. Daisy, who was the first-year student of college, would go to a par near her school every day in morning, she would bring a small recorder with her, in park she would find quiet corner and listen to a tape of English stories.
【分析】這個句子不僅僅存在語法問題，另外還有完整性，準(zhǔn)確性問題。
【提升】Daisy, a first-year college student, enjoys studying in the park near her school. Each morning she brings a small recorder, finds a quiet corner in the park, and listens to a tape of English stories.
如果同學(xué)們在寫句子的時候，注意以上五點(diǎn)，相信大家一定能夠?qū)懗稣_，完整，準(zhǔn)確的英文句子。
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